a poignant stare
brings the color to my face
and the red of blood
pumps rapidly through my veins
my eyes swim in your light
and my mind is torn in dierctions
yet untold
and I feel a disillusioned sense
of wanting
can you tell me what I want to hear?
or do your words fall without weight?
Wow great one! I dunno how I missed it before, but it's definitely one of your best, in my opinion. The last line is amost like a Haiku in its metaphorical beauty. Well done! You rock KT!