Sometimes don't remember

I feel love,

but I feel the weight of your

shadow,

and I don't know why.

You seem to change the weather

when you cry.

Why do you cry?

I feel love,

I feel the heat of your emotion

when we're in the grind,

the pressure of your passion

and then I'm left

behind.

and I don't know why.

why do you cry?

why do you   cry?

 

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Free-Spirited_Wolf's picture

Great write 

Great write 


*~Be Legendary ~ Ian Mascoe*

tallsquirrelgirl's picture

"I feel love but I feel the

"I feel love but I feel the weight of your shadow"...and I feel the weight of your words. great write!


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

Blackwingedbird's picture

Thank you so very much.

Thank you so very much.

allets's picture

Does

"in the grind" mean what I think it mean? I'm an old woman with a delicate fragile heart - when I hear such things it may not be good for my ticker. Or, it may simply be over stimulation; it gets difficult to distinguish. Endorphins - love 'em! - allets -

 


 

 

Blackwingedbird's picture

Yup.

Yup.

allets's picture

Happy New Year

It will be a great year for writers for 2017! - allets -