Small steps

Off

to travel, too traveled

to parts un........

Where does the mind seek shelter?

It cannot be closed

in.

At least something spins

to unacceptable truths

weary, worn and rusty it carries

on.

Isn't it strange then

that a fish may gasp for breath?

Openning the door means, go

out.

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Out of the comfort zone. Ha!

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SSmoothie's picture

You know what I really get

You know what I really get this piece and I really love it it captures the unthinking thoughts and the mindsurrounding ability to manoeuvre into and out of the possible impossibles. You can outrun but you cant unthnk ;)  much enjoyed thanks SS 


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Blackwingedbird's picture

You are a very smart person.

You are a very smart person.

allets's picture

The Act Of Going

to strange and new or old places. We are tetras out of water most of the time, out-zoned but that is part of any door's definition. Well penned. ~A~