If I were to die tomorrow,
Would I leave anybody behind in sorrow
Or would they all just laugh and say
I’ll never miss her, no way
Have I treated the people I love with respect
Have I mended more hearts than I have wrecked
Have I been there the best that I could for my friends
Will I be satisfied with my life when it finally ends
Have I been the perfect daughter for my father
And did I tell my sister enough that I love her
Would my mother have been proud of me if she was still alive
Have I done my best to help this world survive
Have I done more right than I have done wrong
Will anybody remember me when I’m gone
If I were to die today
Have I said all the things I wanted to say?
This poetry is great. If you would ask me to score it I would give it a 10.
Because all these thoughts in your poem are also in my head.
This poem is incredibly amazing! It´s really great, the words are awesome!
Oh wow!
This was realy good. You captured the feelings for this poem very very well!