Hark ! the heavens do indeed whisper
Swish of breeze we must hear
Deafening thunder renting the sky
Do we hear or are we deaf ? Why ?
God's angels sing through bird's throat
The singing nightingale on branch afloat
Someday we haughty humans'll shed coat
Join the realm of heaven please note
But as long as we can breathe and live
Let us cradle the gods gifts and try to forgive
Soon in a whiff the last breath shall escape
I'll feel the angel's kiss on my neck's nape
©bishu
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"Swish of breeze we must hear"
great line & great truth! everyone hears the thunder, but that "swish of breeze"...:-) well done, Sir!
You are an accomplished poet on this site Sir Beavis
You are an accomplished poet on this site Sir Beavis.I am overwhelmed by your kind comment Sir.Thanks !!!!!!!!!
©bishu
A wonderful poem bishu
A wonderful poem bishu about all that is dear and that plunge into the unknown realm of death. How dramatic; I enjoyed your poem very much; it's so unfair we have to move from earth to hopefully a heavenly realm; as there is so much beauty here don't you think?
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Respected Madam Anita Thank you for liking the post
Respected Madam Anita Thank you for liking the post.We have to bid goodbye to all the wonderful gifts bestowed upon us .Death is certain whenever that is .No point in wasting another wonderful day of life.What lies beyond death none know although thousands of hypotheses are there penned & preached by wise people ~Be well be happy~
©bishu
I love your imagery
I love your imagery especially that of the deafening thunder. :)
Thanks my dear friend Mr Peter
Thanks my dear friend Mr Sceneric Peter
May God help you to write better n better
I am looking forward to having a baby sitter
Who'll take care of me when I'm old and senile
Till then let me try to write something worthwhile ~Your friend across the ocean~
©bishu
Ah! My Friend you are indeed
Ah! My Friend you are indeed a wordsmith. This is I think the best of your exquisite poems. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes fromall at my humble abode. Bern.
Yes ! A wordsmith hammering away till fingers rot :)
Yes ! A wordsmith hammering away till fingers rot :) If this is "the best" I should stop immediately shouldn't I ?? Thanks for your good wishes. I also wish you the same from my nestdwellers.~Your friend unseen Guffawing liver & spleen =BM~
©bishu
Wonderful!
This is beautiful Mr. Bishu. :)
Thank you for your kindness Mr Haque my friend
Thank you for your kindness Mr Haque my friend
©bishu