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The soft whispers from within the fragmented mind

Seeping through the body and awakened soul at night

Grey cells meandering through the silent capillaries

Difficult it is to free the mind from its earthly worries

Meditating in the wee hours of the low trafficked morn

Mind and body is fresh again all their weariness gone

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Many knowledgable poets on this site indulge in meditation which indeed helps to come out of daily ruts.Thought traffic is less during the wee hours (my own perception) In my spot it is called "brahma muhurta"

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©1 February 2014 - 9:28am — bishu
6 February 2014 - 12:33pm — a.griffiths57
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Sounds from whithin:

 

I like the contrast you make in each sentence, they are so comparable yet contrasting. Soothing poetry for the sleepless through meditation and a new begining the outcome, well done very cleverly written, your poem is an excellent read and well written.

 

 

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9 February 2014 - 9:03am — bishu
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Peace to you and All

Peace to you and All.Thanks Respected Mm Anita.

©bishu 

 

3 February 2014 - 2:03pm — nightlight1220
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Very peaceful read. Loved

Very peaceful read. Loved it!!

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "