Ice

                       Ice         

 

 

An ice cube which just fits into the palm

Try to crush it will all his might

Hand aches – pain and icy numbness

He is scared to let go the experience

The dull frozen pain remains seems unending

Ice cold water drips mercifully through fingers

After long while the ice is gone the feeling lingers

                                                             

His palm is warm and dry – the pain is gone

So has the meaningful experience of reality

The thoughts linger-palms ache to become cold    

Seeing the ice-cubes in glasses of fizzy drinks

Wraps his fingers around the frosted glass

In hot summer ,the feeling is nice,the pain is gone

Cold is gold in summer ,too much is pain,all in one

 

©bishu

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Wierd effort .. Colours a gift gratis from Respected Madam Dove.I'll learn though it may take time.

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Nice one!

Nice one Mr. Bishu.

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A comment from you is truly great for me Mr Haque

A comment from you is truly great for me Mr Haque because you're a scholar of English and teaching it to students....... Thank you sooo much


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Nice ice very chill indeed! I

Nice ice very chill indeed! I like it! I like it alot! Especially with diet coke but I cant have that any more it's bad for me... Hugss 


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Thanx Respected SS Must be off to be at the

Thanx Respected SS Must be off to be at the streetshows on this swamp > Durga Pooja.GN8


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