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Lather on the soul

Docs trying to hold 

Slips to other side

No friends no foe

No guilt no woe

In natural light

May all glow

Pour clean water

Add some laughter

Spray sea sand

Soul’ll respond to

Anyone’s demand

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Words put into an empty tin and shaken wildly

Then lid opened and spattered its contents

 

This isn’t what poets call poetry. But again I iterate who said I was a poet ?

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last updated 30 April 2015 - 6:43am
©30 April 2015 - 6:23am — bishu
2 May 2015 - 12:24am — TheShadowKnows
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Random shmandom

Really is it just a random spattering? That makes me sad I quite like this poem... I actually liked it a really lot! Read it more than once. 

1 May 2015 - 5:16pm — deepinyourdreams
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hmmm

I sense the lather on a "Natural Light" glow...Tongue Out

"Deepinyourdreams"

30 April 2015 - 9:12pm — allets
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Lather

is a good word. It's like the result of a lot of SOAP. -

Somberly the hands
Overlap to create lather.
After the bar, rinse.
Please pass the towel.
.
Lady A
04-30-15
522p
.

 

 

30 April 2015 - 9:12pm — allets
allets's picture

Lather

is a good word. It's like the result of a lot of SOAP. -

Somberly the hands
Overlap to create lather.
After the bar, rinse.
Please pass the towel.
.
Lady A
04-30-15
522p
.