Go!

Go on girl, get away from me.

You cute and all, but with you,

I don't want to be.

Go on now,

Keep your hands to yourself.

Didn't you see my girl?

Well, that was her that just left.

Please tell me,

What part of go don't you understand.

I have never hit a girl before,

but you are about to catch a backhand.

Please go cause my patience are running thin

And I'm tire of repeating myself over and over again.

Ok OK

I'll tell you how you can turn me on.

Here's some change, there's the bus,

Catch it, and take your ass on.

Go!

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nancylangley's picture

TEMPA !!!! TEMPA!!!! WOW !!!!!!!!


NANCY LANGLEY 

tk2003's picture

now thats what i call dedication...im sure your girl appreciates the fact that you dont have time for idle conversation from other women trying to kick it your way...(smile) this poem is good...and funny also...

Teressa Heafner's picture

This is a really good poem. Its upbeat, and filled with anger. Great job!!

CHRISTIE FELTY's picture

Well a side i haven't seen yet! I loved it!!! Some people just don't take hints well.LOL This was hot.

Dario Preston's picture

I love this one fa sho'... Thats all I can say, this is a hott write. Keep scribing...

onelilartist's picture

Wow! You sure told her. lol That was a very delightful poem and I enjoyed reading it. You might want to read my "Has Hell Frozen Over" since I thing we both have the same sentiment here.

Some people just don't get it. It isn't hearts and flowers if both parties are not interested in the pursuit. lol Good job here.

Jessica onelilartist