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My head is a puzzle,

Too many papers piled high,

Unconquerable heights,

For fear I might die.

 

The outcome of failure,

Can make my heart swell,

Just hide from it, Its easier

Than being stuck in this hell.

 

A mortal man would go mad,

And I am no God

So buckle up,

and Extinguish that sod.

 

This question is now,

About helping myself,

Dust down your old dolls,

Make room on your shelf.

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wasn't going to post this as it not my forte, but then I thought I might as well use this website as a general book keeper of sorts. Also if anyone has a suggestion about how to make verse 3 any better I would be grateful.....It does not sound good. 
THANKS!

 

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©14 March 2013 - 12:18am — Biffy
14 March 2013 - 1:41am — FreshHeirLyrics
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A mortal man would go madAnd

A mortal man would go mad

And Lord knows I'm no God

Just Fasten your seatbelt

As we travel through my fog

 

Just a suggestion!!

14 March 2013 - 10:24am — Biffy
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Far better :)  Oddly I had

Far better :)

 Oddly I had Just fasten your seatbelt but change it for the worse :D 
Thanks ~B~ 

14 March 2013 - 12:48pm — SSmoothie
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A mortal man would go

A mortal man would go mad,

And I am no God

So buckle up, grip tight,

theres no sparing the rod! (Tonight) 

 

my 2cents worth :) 

cheers SS 

 

 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

14 March 2013 - 12:51pm — Biffy
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Another brilliant input from

Another brilliant input from SS :) 

I like the two part scentence in the 3rd line a lot,

Think outside the box Biffy!
Thanksss