snowflakes

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snowflakes falling from the sky,

just like questions asking why.

flutter down without a sound,

emotions whirling all around.

not knowing what the future will hold,

the shape it will take of secrets untold.

held close to the heart and hidden away,

to release themselves on some distant day.




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its always snowing here.

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poetvg's picture

BEAUTIFUL

Melvin Lee's picture

I particularly like poems with a childlike and whimsical kind of style . This poem of yours clearly and most distinctively portray such a sentiment. Beautifully written, Liz... Smilesz. Do try some of my childlike poems, from my first hall: 1. SkyDancer 2. To Catch A Forgotten Dream 3. Snowman Ray 4. Dandelion Enjoy ~~!