Rain

Sound of the rain
Feel of your breath
You whisper my name
Again and again…

You hold me tight
And touch my hair
Your lips are warm!

Your eyes won’t close
From fear
Of losing me again

The rain drops
A car drove by
My room is peaceful
When life stops!

I love the rain
It makes me think
of you holding me again

You are so far away
Suffering alone
I know one day
Things will change
And you will come home

Darling you are so far
Miles away
I can hear your guitar
Strumming my name

From miles away
I can feel your breath
Your ghost is home!

And I woke up again
Devastated alone
My bed is cold
Ah I feel the pain!

It’s you and the rain
Keep calling my name
again and again

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SSmoothie's picture

Gorgeous!

This is about a couple of my favorite things and yes rain is an amazing occurrence it stirs so much in me, I loved the imagery you have used to guide the reader through your emotions wonderful!


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9inety's picture

wow

i feel the rain
in you tears

peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot