In maiden dream I pass the night
Where man fought man with all his might
Where armoured man rode armoured steed
And chivalry was word and deed
Beneath the stars and near the lake
I waited for my love to wake
Each night we'd meet by the brook
I'd pause a moment to take a look
And there beneath the starry skies
On earth's fresh grass, my love lies
I gaze upon his handsome face
Desiring to be no other place
In silence I watch as my knight rests
Upon tender grass he has made our nest
I slip from my spot behind a tree
Beside him now on bended knee
I reach down, his face to touch
That strong, set jaw I love so much
My hand, I run, along his chest
At his waist my hand does rest
For with a stretch he begins to rise
And I look into clear, blue eyes
Gazes meet and with a smile
My heart begins to pound ere while
Tis no other place I'd rather be
Than all alone, my knight and me
For with my knight, I've found true love
That rivals brightness from above
In words whispered and secrets shared
To my dear knight, my heart lay bared
I gave him all I had to give
Yet only here our love can live
For with the stars came my knight
To be gone by morning light
So before the sun can rise above
Come, Sir Knight, and be my love
An exquisite ballad!
J-Called
This poem is so romantic. The words really make you feel the setting and wish to be there.
Sorry about the screwed up non-critiques. I kept messing up. Your poetry is very vivid and extremely well-written. Great job!
Nice poetry here! Good wording and idea also! Love it!
this poem is wonderful, captivating.....and damn....its great..lol. Just loved it