the Brink

Calling in the distance,
the lights go out and the music fades.
Droplets of laughter, poised on the tips of my toes.
Here in this place,
between sleep and awake,
worlds tumble together, dreams trickle through.
Here in the rain,
I'm thinking of you,
when the music fades.

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Letgetgo's picture

Really good. Need more

Really good. Need more stuff. Write More Stuff. Favorite line, "Droplets of laughter, poised on the tips of my toes." Brilliant!

bellafyre's picture

thank you!!

Thank you so much for your comments, and i do love a good twist on imagery :) I've finally posted something new, The Call, I hope you're not disappointed as it's a bit different :)

Jesster's picture

Where is this new post?

Where is this new post?


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bellafyre's picture

Should be there now :)

Actually, you should be able to see it now, in my portfolio :) Took me a little longer to post than I thought!

Jesster's picture

cool... I like your profile

cool... I like your profile pic


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Thank you!! Loved it the

Thank you!! Loved it the first moment I saw it, and I remember thinking to myself, "if I have to live another life-time, I want to come back as her!!" :o) lol

oh and can i just say... your pup looks like a sweetheart!! sigh... our husky passed away 3 years ago, and you know, life at home has never been the same... one day, i think i need to get me a new puppy!!

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I wanna come back as her too.

I wanna come back as her too. My doggie is a cutie. We don't live together anymore. It's never the same without our loyal friends.


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