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crucible
Folder:
30 years in a Hole Why make me
the arbiter
of your life?
You reached
this point
without
my aid.
I struggle enough
not to feed myself,
yet you stoke my
hunger pangs.
Why do I deserve
a rung in the
Hell you've made,
when I have
one of my own?
THUD*
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Oh My, Did you hear that Beavis?
That was a brief moment of me hitting the floor with unconsciousness.
I love your writings.
I truly do. <3
"I struggle enough
not to feed myself,
yet you stoke my
hunger pangs."
Ugh, This Line!
THUD*
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Ohhh!
Allow me the help you up! I fear not for my reputation, but we can't have a lady (much less an angel!) found sprawled out on the floor!!! ;-) Thank you Dear! Your folder "http://www.postpoems.org/authors/ashes_twisted/folder/937244" is absolutely captivating! I thought to read through it in a night, but the poems are too moving! I could only manage three before I overloaded! Simply masterful!
The darker side
of Beaves. It just goes to show the versatility and impressions of a talented writer.
My hat's off to you, sir, for your powerful verse.
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Many thanks, kind Sir!
Many thanks, kind Sir!
:( your writing is coming off
:( your writing is coming off so bitter these days Beavis, it breaks my heart
Much Love
Ashley
;-)
It's all in how the sunlight lands on the stone-just seeing that one facet, not the whole stone. I'm just cooking with different spices. Too much sweetness makes one fat. I live within the light although often must walk through the darkness. I'm fine Dear and life is sweet ;-)
Good just checkin ;-)
Good just checkin ;-)
Much Love
Ashley
I saw 37 and rushed right in
I saw 37 and rushed right in to read! I was not disappointed with the law of averages, or the laws of logic, you are really something b, this poem has so much in it where do I begin! There's always two wrongs and two rights in any fight, and yeah, those last lines really brought it home! Great stuff B! Great stuff! HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
HugSS!!!
You are as constant and faithful as the sunrise, Polaris and the beat of my heart. The day will come when this must change, but we will be different beings, and beyond the effects of such changes by then;-) Love ya!
WOW....powerful, potent,
WOW....powerful, potent, effective.
Thanks Lisa!
There was power behind this one ;-)
37 Is Not A Number
...it's a milestone. Glory be! A new one from B. We were starved, bitter, sweet, no matter, the B is back! Encore, encore! - Lady A
Many thank, Lady A!;-)
Many thank, Lady A!;-)