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Fickle Bitch
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My Fickle Bitch My first thought, "Fuck you,
you Fickle Bitch",
as you flash that coquettish smile,
slinking in with catlike grace,
unfazed by my dismay.
Faithfully,
I wait for you, pen in hand,
never asking where you've been
when you leave me desolate, alone;
barren, bare, striped to the mystical poetic bone;
tormented by your absence -
and then you stumble in,
giddy to find me
grateful at your return,
watching as those
spiteful thoughts melt
with your merest smile,
knowing all is forgiven,
without apology.
This is awesome! Inspiration
This is awesome! Inspiration is a bitch for sure! Fantastic description of a creative and fickle spark!
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Thanks Moonshadow!
Thanks Moonshadow!
Wow this is the first time I
Wow this is the first time I have ever seen you write words of hate
Much Love
Ashley
;-)
I always get pissed when I can't write or everything I do write sucks. Have to wait on the "fickle bitch" to come back ;-). Started this one because I was pissy about just sitting there with time to write and nothing worth writing about ;-)
Where as I think everything
Where as I think everything is worth writing about poetically, even nothing's ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
this is why we love you babe
this is why we love you babe ;)
Much Love
Ashley
Indeed!
Smoothie, you've gotten me to write and post far more than I ever imagined!!! You are an inspiration, my Dear! I love how bold you are! I doubt I would have ever posted this one without our many conversations and without reading your work. You ROCK Dear!!! ;-)
No, WE rock! ;) a symbiotic
No, WE rock! ;) a symbiotic relationship, you got me to test the boundaries and recognise gems, and how to polish it is I who am inspired by your mastery and patience for beauty and power in words! HugSS always SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Indeed!!!
That is sooo perfect for us!!! Your fire blazing away from a brilliant lightning stroke and my sand slowly grinding away combining to allow all the possibilities of creation in glass!!! Amazing!!! Love ya!!!
Even that sound just
Even that sound just beautiful! The raw blacksmith and the artful sword maker... Making mighty pens ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
<3 I adore you both
<3
I adore you both
Much Love
Ashley
We both adore you! Rwr For
We both adore you! Rwr For president! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
:)
:)
Much Love
Ashley
yea writer's block does that
yea writer's block does that to me too. hang in there it will be fine.
so is the fickle bitch the writing? or a woman? cause if it's a woman smack her for me and tell her she should stick around, you my dear are a catch :)
Much Love
Ashley
Yeah, the fickle bitch is the
Yeah, the fickle bitch is the inspiration/ability to write something decent, instead of just filling up my notebook with lines and ideas.
Normally I would have caught
Normally I would have caught that sooner but lack oh oxtgen to my brain and all. upon second read it all makes sense now and I love the poem,anger and all.
Much Love
Ashley
Lol! You better be taking
Lol! You better be taking care of yourself! I don't have relatives there, but I do have friends who wear toques and owe me a favor. They could show up with a nurse and wheelchair... Don't make me make a call! ;-)
I usually keep the anger channeled elsewhere, but that week absolutely sucked for so many reasons, and then not being able to write anything I liked was just the "F' it all" moment. Funny, it seemed to have worked and got things flowing ;-)
It really did and yea I am
It really did
and yea I am taking care of me I got antibiotics :-(
Much Love
Ashley
I like this poem. Reminds me
I like this poem. Reminds me of someone dear..
Copyright © JessterStarshine
Thanks! I'm rather fond of
Thanks! I'm rather fond of the fickle bitch myself ;-)
Me too! Here's to keeping the
Me too! Here's to keeping the flow... :)
Copyright © JessterStarshine
Nice fucking twist! Love the
Nice fucking twist! Love the ending! What's the go? You're on a pebble snatching roll!! Psml! Love it! Fave lines... First 18 lines! I just love the way you turn those last lines!!?,
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I told ya i have no control
I told ya i have no control over her! hope it was worth the wait ;-) The name was well earned! ;-)
Yes, very a.muse.ing! Lol!
Yes, very a.muse.ing! Lol! Great work!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
LMAO!!! Allow me to thank you
LMAO!!! Allow me to thank you on her behalf. Who knows where she is or what's she's up to ;-)
Clearly the fickle bitch is
Clearly the fickle bitch is jealous of me. ;P
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
PMSL!!!
Well who wouldn't be, my Dear! I've had to talk her off the ledge several times, only to have her run off screaming and spitting! ;-p. (she really hates it when I give you super massive hugSs! ;-)
PSML! Lol! Love ya b! And
PSML! Lol! Love ya b! And that bitch too even though she doesn't deserve it my life would suck with out her! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
About the Bitch
When I first read the poem, I thought you were talking about my sister, then I remembered, she doesn't inspire, leave, come back, etc. Second reading, i knew you were talking about me, then I realized, I'm not a real bitch most of the time so it had to be your muse by deduction. Life is tough enough without such conundrums, dear. Loved the art - the rant was soooooooo fine and the muse must have been impressed by so much comments inspired by her absence and sudden return. Fickle fickle toil and tickle, she will be gone, but let's not hope soon~~~~~~~~~~Lady A
;-)
LMAO!!! Many thanks Lady A! Yeah! True love, or I'd never put up with her fickle ass! ;-)
Just Re-read This Poem
Enjoyed it thorougly again. Looking for good stuff to read out here, way down here in the belly where the good stuff waits to be re-digested - Thanks for the MUSE-ic - My muse went on vacation. We hit below freezing and hes uh-uh! I don't blame him - so he texts me from the sandy beach with a martini in his hands. I don't mind. I'll take inspiration from sand and sun if needed, snow and wind if unavoidable. Nice write and great to re-read ~Lady A~
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