Held down
Strapped up to my neck
You laugh
As I begin to beg
Then again
My life's always a reck
Why not
Just send my soul to heck
Lets hope
My death won't be a mess
I feel
The pain rush through my chest
I know
My soul will never rest
This pain
Leading over the edge
It hurts me so bad
But I just scream for more
Feeling my blood and guts
Fall out of me right on to the floor
Knowing that all my organs
All of them may be tore
As I lay on the ground
Just screaming and screaming for more
The blood
Drips right down to my feet
Feels like
I'm losing parts of me
I don't
Think I will ever see
The end
Of my pain and misery
Or the
End of my suffering
Oh the
Pain this knife can bring
My life
Is dangling by a string
As I
Simplyfy this feeling
It hurts me so bad
But I just scream for more
Feeling my blood and guts
Fall out of me right on to the floor
Knowing that all my organs
All of them may be tore
As I lay on the ground
Just screaming and screaming for more
Still my favorite
Ooh.. I realy really REALLY like this one Paul.. I really really REALLY do... It's gory, sexy, meaningful, powerful, and relatibul.. I really like it...
Hey paul
I like the poem. See what happens when you listen to my cds lol. We should write some songs together and make the beats for them. If everyone else is going to keep argueing with us about who is going to do what in the band. Then you and me can be the band alone. (sorta a white stripes thing) peace.
Deaths companion
Jonzy
WOW! OMG that is soo awesome! I so wouldnt be surprised if i heard that song on a CD one day *nudge nudge wink wink!* Awesome Poem Paul!!!!
right on, I love blood and guts. that shit is awsome. Oh and I'm saying "hi" back. IM me sometime it would be fun chatting. aim is x13xPerfectScars. yahoo is rabbiteen_she.
kewl...yah i should have spent more time with eddie ..but i meet a new friend possibly a new best friend... i felt bad though cuz eddie was depressed but i thougt he was occupied by beating the crap out of people(my mistake)..yah jills a part of my round table.lol. i really like this one really imaginative ..i enjoy reading and writing poems like that..sorry my a-z poem made you miss jill ..maby there is hope butt dont set your heart on it i would hate for you to hurt any more because of aneyone..well love ya *hugs*
kass
oh whats jills full name i was gunna check her poems out
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