At the first shock
I awoke out of a deep sleep,
Oh the torturous agony!
The sky is falling!
The world is imploding!
We all knew it was going to happen
It was just a matter of time really...
Is this how it ends?
Here in my bed chambers?
Another shock of torturous agony..
The second more intense then the last..
Twisting, and seething I exclaim:
Is that you Satan?
Have you finally come to collect me?
I know I have led a trite,meaningless life..
Sipping the wine from every cup,
Laying about , coveting..
Over indulging...
led astray by the wolves
I am a wretch!
A monster!
Another intense shockwave of pain
Courses throughout my nerves
My sinew
My surely damned , surely charred flesh
Seared to perfection.
I have resolved that Satan himself
Has affixed his pitchfork
Into my buttocks and
Is jolting me
Prodding me
Raping my life from me.
Kicking and screaming
And spitting...
Nightmarish visions ensue
Of horsemen...
Blackened eyes
Black robes and hooded skulls
Scythe and sickle..
The Reaper..
The Queen Ghoul..
The long bony finger of death
Dragging my twisted smoldering carcass
Off to the doldrums of eternal damnation.
.......I pass out....
“Sciatica is a bitch”
"...Laying about, coveting..."
I applaud the way the final
I applaud the way the final line slams the breaks on the supernatural atmosphere of the previous lines.
J-Called
Indeed
it was a full stop , pedal to the floor...screeching tires...refill your breakfluid type of stop.
glad you liked
Definitely!
Definitely!
J-Called
Ha
I have endured sciatica. Really enjoy the way that you write.
© Ground
Thanks
is it not Satan’s pitchfork, gnarled up , poking you in sheer torment?
thank you For the Read.
I happen to be enjoying the throes of its ecstatic torment right this very.
” I scream, you scream, we all scream for morphine “
cheers.