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Mother’s Love
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School Poems Hello mother,
I am here,
Your baby is here.
I hold your cold hand,
And know death is near,
I brush up against your ear,
And whisper…
The worst thing I have ever done.
Please forgive me mother,
I love you so much.
Ten minutes pass by,
And I start to cry.
You are at peace now mother,
This is my goodbye.
Strong emotional content and
Strong emotional content and good form. Keep writing!
Beautiful content and ending.
Beautiful content and ending. I can relate to the middle passage. The poem conveys well your love for your mum... did yours pass away?
Cheers,
Adam_San
Thank you. Yes the poem is
Thank you. Yes the poem is about the minutes before she passed. I am still new to writing poems, I just started this year.
Death Be Not Proud
Hard to write, a poem about a dying mother. Be at peace, both of you - Allets