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On a long dark road

Trying to last forever

Or as long as we can

I'd give you my freedom

If I knew I had mine

My love for you hasn't changed

And it won't with time

Just lay here with me

As I go blind

Blind with your love

Within the stretches of time

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Written January 31, 2002

Don't really like this one much either.

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©24 November 2003 - 6:38pm — bazs_kitten
22 February 2004 - 4:09am — Purple Care Bear (not verified)
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Why don't you like this poem? I think it's really sweet.