Soiled Nightgrown or A Punch in the Face

It came so fast, that fist of steel
The crunch of bone, it felt surreal
The initial pain I did not feel
As usual, I was your meal

I stay silent, I dare not frown
I turn away, my head slummed down
My blood dips freely reddish brown
It soils my new silk nightgown

My brain it pleads, please NO MORE
But I know my cries you will ignore
So I’ll just lay here on the floor
And wait in shame for your encore

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Jesster's picture

Dark souls. May you always

Dark souls. May you always stay free of them!


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battlepink's picture

Thank you all for your

Thank you all for your comments, they mean the world to me.

SSmoothie's picture

they were easy to make

on such good poetry! :) cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

scarey if its real, report it!

if its fiction its very compelling! some tweaks and you got yourself a very very effective and excellent poem! my heart literally breaks for the victim. The last line well... that was a doosie lets just say it had the effect I am sure you intended and all the thought processes about why she would be ashamed etc. a very mind opening and haunting poem. Well done!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

Good poem

Unfortunately, I felt like I was there. Good writing