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The Closet

I’m trapped

In a closet

Where it’s so dark

I can not even see the chain

To pull and turn the light on

I can barely breathe in this closet

Feels just like a python

Is coiled around me

I hate being trapped in this closet

  • But still

  • Outside the closet

    It seems it would be darker

    With people watching

    Every step I take

    Judging me like Olympic judges

    Judging my every move

    Peoples stares wrapping around me

    Just like a python

    Making it hard for me to breathe

    So I think I’ll just stay

    Trapped in a closet

    Where no one can see who I am

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    ©15 October 2012 - 6:32pm — b4i8islept
    20 October 2012 - 6:57pm — b4i8islept
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    Thank you

    Thanks Smoothie.... Thanks Lisa :)

    Roger http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B007TX729I

    17 October 2012 - 1:50pm — SSmoothie
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    Eyes.. They aren't scarey,

    Eyes.. They aren't scarey, it's the lies now they are scarey, closets ... Swap the doors for a bulletproof attitude no one should be what they are not, that's how every Shakespearean tragedy starts! ;) HugSS good poem!

    Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

    "Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

    7 December 2012 - 7:01pm — b4i8islept
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    Thank you

    Thank you Smoothie for reading and the comment

    Roger http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B007TX729I

    17 October 2012 - 1:05pm — battlepink
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    From the words of The

    From the words of The Clash....."should I stay or should I go"

    This is very interesting and at the same time powerful.

    7 December 2012 - 7:01pm — b4i8islept
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    Thanks

    Thanks Lisa. Your comments mean so much to me :)

    Roger http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B007TX729I