Smoked

This time
Time is out
Forgot to wipe off my pout
Try to forget
Wheezing death
Kissing a cigarette
Smoke licking your ears
Through your hair
And into the barrel of the gun
Smoke's all gone babe
This time
Your time is out

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nkorinko's picture

I really like this. Its very breif but yet very descriptive. I really liked the part "Smoke licking your ears.."


The only problem with the story carved on your chest, is its hard to read when your missing your ribs..