Who Will Make Her See?

Within an asylum of predetermined time

She awaits generous words of praise.

He tells her he loves her

But ~

The circut of never-ending lies

will tonight, once again,

pierce her heart.



In anticipation she awaits the call

that will not come.

Her mind knows of the betrayal

and yet ~

her heart will not waver in its love.





~



Please, Dear Lord . . .

look upon this young woman and bring peace.

Animate her heart to hear the true alarm of her plight.



~





Tonight ~

I cry for her refusal to see her reality.

Tomorrow ~

I will again try to reach her with the truth.

Forever ~

She will be called

Friend!  






















Author's Notes/Comments: 

OK Hawksquaw . . . Now this was really hard!!  The challenge ~ Ten randomly picked words from the dictionary to be put in a form of poetry.  Each of us picked the other's words.  Here are the words given me. circut ~ animate ~ predetermined ~generous ~ waver ~pierce ~asylum ~time ~ and praise.

Geesh!!   LOL

Great fun!  ~Lesa~

oh yes, and alarm. Smiles.

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chris's picture

It is amazing to me the talent you have.
Those words really screamed very loud.
I have a feeling I know whom it is about, but I don't know.
We must always try to get others to see when they cannot.

HAWK SQUAW's picture

well you met this challenge with out any trouble I believe...... this was a great read...... I was so into it that I forgot that it was a challenge from me......how funny is that......LOL...

thank you for the great words that you sent my way.... I will be posting that soon....

Hawksquaw

onelilartist's picture

WELL! I'm outraged! All the way to "author's comments" I thought some poor moronic woman needed to be shaken til her teeth rattled. PUH-LEEZE! lol Very good job. How does one get in on this game, I wonder?
Jessica