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Majestic Flight
You soar within the darkness of space.
In solitude, you play with stars.
Heaven's splendor awaits you!
Do not abuse its call.
Reach to touch God's face,
For he is there ~
To guide you
to your
quest.
You soar within the darkness of space.
In solitude, you play with stars.
Heaven's splendor awaits you!
Do not abuse its call.
Reach to touch God's face,
For he is there ~
To guide you
to your
quest.
I liked your description of the nonet.
It looks fun, maybe I will try that. I love a challenge.
I see what you mean by a challenge in restraint.
A great poem too.
So little can say so much.
Now this I like. and I though sonnets, hiaku's and tanka's were challenging. Great write, great subject. Flows smoothly, nothing forced.
Lesa, This is beautiful, a truly exquisite nonet. And the poem by Hawk Squaw (Renee) that inspired it is one of my favorites of hers.
I read about nonets on a poetry board several months ago and have written several since I discovered the form. I'm also the one who challenged Renee to try her hand at writing one; of course she met that challenge with her usual grace and charm. ;)
Miranda
well tbis was a great piece of writing.... something that you should be very proud of.......
I am with you...... I like this sort of writing.....because those that know me know that I love to talk......LOL.... just the way I am..... and this does make you use words so carefully to make sure that the reader sees what you are painting......
you have written this with great images..... and it was perfect......
let me know if you do another of these......
should you be up for it...... I have a challenge for you.....
A challenge is wonderful isn't it Lesa! This was very good and you still held the one concept throughout each line to the last word. Great job!
Lesa, I liked this so much that I am going right now to write and post my very own NONET ~~~~
P.S. Be sure and tell Miranda Rae hello for me... Havn't heard from her in a long time ~~~:)
Peace and love ~~~~ Dougie ~~