I’ve tried to live my life
And open other doors
I’ve tried to like the feelings
Of hands that are not yours
I’ve tried to kiss new lips
Upon a brand new face
I’ve tried to find the sweetness
In a brand new taste
I’ve tried to catch the glance
Of someone else’s eyes
I’ve tried to hear the words
Of someone else’s lies
I’ve tried to hold the moments
When I've forgotten you
I’ve tried to do this honestly
But I really don’t want too
I’ve tried to just move on
But I just don’t care
I don’t want to see my future
Without you there
I was ready to say that was the best think I have seen you write, in like, a long time, simple ...awesome...but then I hated the last stanza, I think you are missing a word in the last line then it would be so good, better flow
Nicole.J.Burgesss
I completely agree with you, any sugestions?
Much Love
Ashley