Steel Bars

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2009

I’ve tried to live my life

And open other doors

I’ve tried to like the feelings

Of hands that are not yours



I’ve tried to kiss new lips

Upon a brand new face

I’ve tried to find the sweetness

In a brand new taste



I’ve tried to catch the glance

Of someone else’s eyes

I’ve tried to hear the words

Of someone else’s lies



I’ve tried to hold the moments

When I've forgotten you

I’ve tried to do this honestly

But I really don’t want too



I’ve tried to just move on

But I just don’t care

I don’t want to see my future

Without you there

Author's Notes/Comments: 

sadly, Michael Bolton puts it best, "steel Bars" check it out, for your ears and soul I'd advise reading the lyrics rather then downloading the song

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Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

I was ready to say that was the best think I have seen you write, in like, a long time, simple ...awesome...but then I hated the last stanza, I think you are missing a word in the last line then it would be so good, better flow


Nicole.J.Burgesss

running_with_rabbits's picture

I completely agree with you, any sugestions?


Much Love

Ashley