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I hate this dejection that you ask me to swallow

I hate that you lied to me and I hate that I fallow

I hate how you want me and worse how you won't

I hate how you hurt me and I hate when you don't

I hate how you make me feel and how you bring the real me out

I hate all the moments we've shared and how they cause you doubt

I hate the things I know I can no longer have or desire

I hate how you want me to stay around and never tire

But most of all I hate how when it comes down to hating you

I hate how there is nothing I hate more then everything I still want to do

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ok nicole I know, but I was thinking about how this poem reminds me of the one in the movie so I coundted the lines and there were ten, enough said, I am sorry hate me all you want, or post a critique singing our song, :)

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©8 May 2006 - 6:19am — running_with_rabbits
12 March 2007 - 2:32pm — Nicole.J.Burgess
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"I want you to want me,
I need you to need me,
I'd love you to love me
I'm begging you to beg me

Shine up my old brown shoes
I put on a brand new shirt
i'd get home early from work
if you'd say that you love me...

Didn't I, didn't I, didn't I see you crying
oh..Didn't I, didn't I, didn't I see you crying
feeling all alone without a friend
you know ya feel like dying
oh..Didn't I, didn't I, didn't I see you crying!!!!!!

lol, i honestly did like this to be honest, im not quite as skeptical as you think perhaps???

Nicole.J.Burgesss