Best friends and store bought stars

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Electric stars an the ceiling so bright
Lighting up the palest little night
Best friends sit on their makeshift hill
Toasting to dreams that may always stay still
A picnic of hopes they hold deep inside
Together they'll never have to hide
A friendship built on the truest love
Watched by angels from the heavens above
Nothing can break a friendship so true
A love found by the luckiest few

Stars giving off a sweet yellow glow
Cheers and passions only God shall know
Using Schweppes as their wine
Imaginations of a finer kind
Nothing could ever hold them down
They may cry but they'll never frown
Life's never been nice to these two
But together they'll make it trough
Nothing can ever tear them apart
They share one soul, one heart

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me and my best friend wrote this. it may suck but it has meaning to us and thats what counts. injoy.

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Gary Mills's picture

This is as simple and as sweet as the title. I think everyone needs friends, best ones are better. Subject to metering be damned, I like the drummer you march to. Well done.

Mike Tracey's picture

Now thats the ideal friendship. Well written

Dewey Davis's picture

It doesn't suck (my opinion). It brings back nice memories for me. Thanks to you and your best friend.

Laurie Lane's picture

That was so sweet. So preious true friendship is and rarier still. I love this piece. For its meaning is so very true. Very touching words on friends. Bravo!

Aimee Owens's picture

It doesn't suck. I have 2 best friends and we all share one soul too :) We've been the best of friends for ever, but recently found each other again. I think it's a lovely poem

turonah's picture

The form isn't the best, but it's a good poem. The title is great and explains the poem very well.

Vicki D's picture

Very kewl guys!! I love it and think that it is a great poem! Wish I could write something like that!! Love ya always Vicki

Ashley Hommel's picture

you think she'd really know she just came here to make me feel better and i told her we wrote it. ash

Nicole's picture

How did she know about us?!?! Luv Nici.