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Can I kiss you?
Can I touch you?
Can I hold you?
Can I love you?

Would you kiss me?
Would you touch me?
Would you hold me?
Would you love me?

Do you see me?
Like I see you
Do you want me?
Like I want you

Can I need you?
Can I feel you?
Can I hug you?
Can I breathe you?

Would you need me?
Would you feel me?
Would you hug me?
Would you breathe me?

Do you know me?
Like I know you
Do you feel me?
Like I feel you

 

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©14 October 2001 - 4:23am — running_with_rabbits
28 March 2002 - 1:44pm — Nicole.J.Burgess
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As lond as you are not asking me, it's all good!!
But if you are... not interseted. (jokes)
You know I like this one
good structure, flow.
I knew you loved me!!!;)
Nikki

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4 March 2002 - 5:28am — Katy Marshall (not verified)
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very good poem......I really like it. :) <3 ~Katy

15 October 2001 - 4:23am — Mike Tracey (not verified)
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Thay says what I want to say That says what I think That says what I wish you would say

15 October 2001 - 4:23am — Anna Banana (not verified)
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Wow, really great. So true too. So many questions just begging to be answered, great thing to think about. And yeah, poems are great for hidden feelings. But sometimes you gotta suck it up and face your fears....

15 October 2001 - 4:23am — Vicki D (not verified)
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nice..good job love ya alwyas Vicki

15 October 2001 - 4:23am — turonah
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Great poem Sorry for the response I wrote; you understand

15 October 2001 - 4:23am — Katherine Worden (not verified)
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I saw your Jay2 poem on a random thing and I know a boy named Jason who I call Jay so I thought I would check it out. It turns out your a very talented writer and that you have a lot going for you as a poet. This poem was great not only because your words were easy to understand but because we all feel that way from time to time. Hardest part is telling them. I hope you told this person because obvilously you care very much so for them! Keep it up! Kate

15 October 2001 - 4:23am — Miranda Rae (not verified)
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Ashley, I've read several of your poems but this one is my favorite. So honest and direct! I hope you get your courage up and recite this to him or give him a copy to read for himself. In the meantime, yep writing it down does work very well!

15 October 2001 - 4:23am — Edwin Robinette (not verified)
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A sincere poem of desire! I like the way this flows!

20 March 2002 - 2:39am — turonah
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Great poem; I like the style, the rhythm. Gramatically, tho, in the stanzas where you only have two question marks, they should be on the other lines (ie - "Do you know me/Like I know you?")
Very well done.

Reuben

20 March 2002 - 8:20pm — running_with_rabbits
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tisk tisk
you always were the picky one

ash

Much Love

Ashley