In the middle of December
clouds eclipse the moon.
Silver shadows dance on the snow.
An old man watches from his window,
silently, the diamond feathers drop
And I can’t help it, but I feel empty.
I can’t help to wonder where I’ll be
when I’ve reached my December.
Through the sky’s steamy window
the stars glow their brightest.
The earth lay still under heavy shadows
and the old man’s expression melts.
Loneliness drags his mouth to a frown.
And I can’t help it, but I feel empty
I can’t help to wonder where I’ll be
when I’ve reached my December
A tear glistens on his cheek
reflecting the past, reflecting his life.
Nobody is there to catch it as it falls.
Please, God ,let me have someone
to catch my tears in my December.
And I can’t help it, but I feel empty
I can’t help to wonder where I’ll be
when I’ve reached my December
I love the structure of this, the repeating phrase gives it character, however the message is a little sad, its beautifullly written. Keep Writing
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