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temptation's mistake
the urges are to great
my thoughts I speculate
they need to understand
someone give out there hand
show the rules of this land
before I make a mistake
that is too great
help before its to late
sinking and falling
dragging and crawling
tenderness in the morning
is worth the wait
maybe even a mistake
consequences, can i take?
dirty looks i can bare
seeing your gentleness is rare
that's worth all the stares
because its a gift
your passionate honest kiss
that feelings so bliss
As a fellow creature of language within the framework
of traditional romanticism, your poetry isthe embodiment of that extension between soul and body, consciousness and unconsciousness, subject and entity, culture and environment, speech and muteness, immortality and mortality. You model a kind of identity that does not depend on the mythical yet exhibits simplicity with a fine mastery of form, as you give insight to the human experience so eloquently.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
that was deep lol but thank
that was deep lol but thank you for your words
not only rains
it pours
sun not only shines
it enlightens
not only love
but give life