rosy cheeked

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why are you so easy
to be walk passed
but then so difficult
to completely forget

a cattle brand that
sears waking memory
scathes dreams of night
what remains of you 

are rumpled bed-
clothes at sun-up
and crumpled sheets
on litter-strewn desk
 

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We get the whole picture in

We get the whole picture in shimmering and minimal stanzas: the allure, the glorious obsession, the fulfillment. And it all began with a glimpse of beauty and ends with . . . well, that's an open-ended question you shrewdly injected.

 

A brilliant poem of attraction.

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Thanks kindly

How things progress and culminate can be very surprising and quite available to those that venture. 
Many a memory turned to legacy have been forged thusly over millennia and poetry is one way to keep these!

You are most appreciated.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

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