please stop dancing on my grave, prester john

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when that church van speeds by me in a construction zone
doing 70 in a 45
is Ceasar getting what is his?
 

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i cut out the rest and will update it as soon as i rework it, but i wanted to keep that title up

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Lyra Mayme's picture

I like this poem alot. I don't have much to say beyond what has already been said, but again, I really like the title. I often have trouble with titles, and really appreciate good ones. It works well short. You don't need to add anything, because there is nothing else to say. Excellent.

S74rw4rd's picture

Bravo. The brilliance of this poems reminds me of two great poets---Wallace Stevens, for the title; and JV Cunningham, for the compression. But neither of them having anything to compare with this exquisite poem!


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