2 October 2003 - 11:07pm — Lyra Mayme (not verified)
I like this poem alot. I don't have much to say beyond what has already been said, but again, I really like the title. I often have trouble with titles, and really appreciate good ones. It works well short. You don't need to add anything, because there is nothing else to say. Excellent.
Bravo. The brilliance of this poems reminds me of two great poets---Wallace Stevens, for the title; and JV Cunningham, for the compression. But neither of them having anything to compare with this exquisite poem!
I like this poem alot. I don't have much to say beyond what has already been said, but again, I really like the title. I often have trouble with titles, and really appreciate good ones. It works well short. You don't need to add anything, because there is nothing else to say. Excellent.
Bravo. The brilliance of this poems reminds me of two great poets---Wallace Stevens, for the title; and JV Cunningham, for the compression. But neither of them having anything to compare with this exquisite poem!
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