Her nectar flows for me alone, sultry, scorching,
and wild, like an unruly tiger with searing claws caught
in a raging fire. Desperate to escape the oppression
of another lonely night, she strips into total exposure
allowing my tongue to pierce her vulnerable
orchid, deep as a Ruby-throated hummingbird – my nose
nuzzling through the mossy grotto where I sniff
the lair of a damp, purring princess.
Hare coursing a favorable opportunity to snare her
moist rabbit, I chain my chin between alabaster pillars,
drinking mist from her bowed-spine waterfall. Climbing
atop her clitoral dome, waiting and waiting the invitation
beckoning me to mount her like a surfboard, ridding
the iridescent waves that spank our lustful thighs
with walloping sounds like: whack, whack, as I watch her
breasts dancing to rhythmic beats of a seahorse ballet.
Nails claw like leopards devouring a lone extant meal
as her teeth nearly pierce my earlobes. She bites like a
feline distressed, yet tastes like cinnamon and honey
unwrapped in the glowing candlelight from a bedroom
penetrated by a dazzling full moon. My lips perforated
from her nibbles, yet still manage to kiss I love you...over
every inch of her delicate skin, drenched in the musky
scent of perfume releasing like champagne bubbles.
Lumbering in her sugar basin feels like a hump in a hot
sauna. It echoes like a Caribbean conch shell. Pretty pink
like oozing cream from a chocolate covered cherry
sliding down your throat, such a sweet savor of ecstasy
flooding my soul in luxury and joy as she grabs my stem
like a python encircling its prey, until every seed spills
a last breath into the memory foam of her vagina, smelling
identical to the aromatic poppies that just intoxicated me.
Excellent use of metaphor and
Excellent use of metaphor and simile. I applaud how you maintain the sensual exertion of the poem through the words you have chosen for your comparisons.
J-Called
Thank you. Rather unexpected
Thank you. Rather unexpected and surprising. But maybe, just maybe!