Her nectar flows for me alone, sultry, scorching,
and wild, like an unruly tiger with searing claws caught
in a raging fire. Desperate to escape the oppression
of another lonely night, she strips into total exposure
allowing my tongue to pierce her vulnerable
orchid, deep as a Ruby-throated hummingbird – my nose
nuzzling through the mossy grotto where I sniff
the lair of a damp, purring princess.
Hare coursing a favorable opportunity to snare her
moist rabbit, I chain my chin between alabaster pillars,
drinking mist from her bowed-spine waterfall. Climbing
atop her clitoral dome, waiting and waiting the invitation
beckoning me to mount her like a surfboard, ridding
the iridescent waves that spank our lustful thighs
with walloping sounds like: whack, whack, as I watch her
breasts dancing to rhythmic beats of a seahorse ballet.
Nails claw like leopards devouring a lone extant meal
as her teeth nearly pierce my earlobes. She bites like a
feline distressed, yet tastes like cinnamon and honey
unwrapped in the glowing candlelight from a bedroom
penetrated by a dazzling full moon. My lips perforated
from her nibbles, yet still manage to kiss I love you...over
every inch of her delicate skin, drenched in the musky
scent of perfume releasing like champagne bubbles.
Lumbering in her sugar basin feels like a hump in a hot
sauna. It echoes like a Caribbean conch shell. Pretty pink
like oozing cream from a chocolate covered cherry
sliding down your throat, such a sweet savor of ecstasy
flooding my soul in luxury and joy as she grabs my stem
like a python encircling its prey, until every seed spills
a last breath into the memory foam of her vagina, smelling
identical to the aromatic poppies that just intoxicated me.
Excellent use of metaphor and
Excellent use of metaphor and simile. I applaud how you maintain the sensual exertion of the poem through the words you have chosen for your comparisons.
Starward
Thank you. Rather unexpected
Thank you. Rather unexpected and surprising. But maybe, just maybe!