She's in her lonesome unity,
Then the feeling looms just like a tree.
Look in her mind; it says "listen to me"
"They're so much better than I'll ever be
They're so much better than I'll ever be
They're five times better than I'll ever be."
The two of you, you look so free.
You're everything that I wanna be.
Look in her eyes and then you'll see;
"You're so much better than I'll ever be
You're so much better than I'll ever be
You're five times better than I'll ever be."
She wants your love, not your pity.
She'd balance her laptop on her knee.
She's sure she's thinking foolishly;
"You're five times better than I'll ever be
You're five times better than I'll ever be
You're so much better than I'll ever be."
She uses up her mind and draws it.
She thinks it is her only asset.
Her value is what she'll produce;
Without her skills, she is no use,
And lacking words, she is no use.
She's suffered but her mind's abuse.
She wants to see the light,
But she gives up before the fight.
Collapsed within its irony,
(Her states swim alternatingly)
So that she really does believe
You're so much better than she'll ever be
You're so much better than she'll ever be
You're so much better than she'll ever be.
Venting
is a PostPoem tradition and this is more a plaint, a longing. We rip things apart when we rant - you know blowin' off fire because steam we can handle. I enjoyed the repetiton and wondered where did you go. Be well - slc