the first day of snow always means i miss you.
sometimes it feels like my heart controls the weather.
the ground looks like clouds. does heaven look like winter?
maybe one day i'll find out when we can be together.
for now i'll make snow angels and one can look like you.
and you can make cloud people and one can be your sister.
and if, at times, i feel your eyes look down upon me, brother,
i promise i will strain my ears just in case you whisper.
Very Nice...I like whispers'
Very Nice...I like whispers'
"Deepinyourdreams"
thanks :)
thanks :)
wow that opening line! it hit
wow that opening line! it hit home hard and fast! thank you for the share, it is a very touching piece
Much Love
Ashley
thank you :) i guess if ur
thank you :) i guess if ur gonna write one awesome line in a poem, it should be the first or the last :)
:)
I thinkt eh opening and ending of a poem is what makes a poem, a solid body is nothign without the right hook and sinker ;)
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Ashley
i fully agree :) thanks again
i fully agree :) thanks again for the compliment, you've got quite an impressive body of work, i certainly trust ur judgement about poetry's technical aspects
:)
thanks
I should hope you also trust yourself, especially when it comes to your own writing :) poets need to truly express self more than they need to learn format or technicalities <3
Much Love
Ashley
so true!!!
so true!!!
A beautiful sentiment. Very
A beautiful sentiment. Very nice.
thank you cevance :)
thank you cevance :)