unknown

somewhere a clock is ticking
ticking for me
a pen is clicking
ready to write my fee

somewhere someone is mocking
laughing at me
a lock is locking
locking away my glee

somewhere death is looking,
not looking at me.
death is taking,
taking you from me.

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grim reaper

Oooo i like your choice of subject,
dark and enlightening,
bold and yet frightening
cold is the reapers touch,
death speak its word and we shall learn much


this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.

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thank you, i dont usually

thank you, i dont usually share my poetry... i just kinda wondered what people would think, hence the name :L nice iambic pentamiter by the way :D

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don't make me find out my dictionary

... erm... thanks, I don't know what one of them is but it sounds cool... even if its an insult lool. Keep penning anon.


this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.

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anonomous

penning? and its not an insult:D its a compliment, iambic pentamiter is the number of sylabuls in a line, the rhythem if you like, its what makes things flow:D

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with a brain like yours you'll rule the world in ten years

Wow thats the first lesson i've ever been taught by someone under half my age.. well I guess you can teach an old dog new tricks. I'm a tell the lads down the pub that and pretend iI already knew it hehehe. Oh P.S. penning as in writing, it seems to be a popular term on this site so I use it to sound hip lol


this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.

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anonomous

haha i dont act my age. wish i didnt have to put it on my profile, people can be very steotypical when it comes to age, experience changes people, and i beleive age is a number, experience is age. and lol, it sounds awesome cos its a really long term, :L iambic pentamiter, sound mathematic :P