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Step forward; out into the light.

Lift your eyes to the sky

And prove them wrong



Sun-shaken egos dread your steps

For they doubt you-

But you will glide



Reach out, and grasp my hand;

I shall lead the way;

Lest you fall



Dry thine eyes-

You have found someone

Who loves you...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Don't give up hope...

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©22 June 2004 - 2:54am — animus
21 September 2004 - 9:09am — Lori Moore (not verified)
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Another beautiful piece. From the way you write, I would say that you have a wonderful heart.

11 August 2004 - 5:41am — rachum
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I agree with Jillian when she says that it really sounds as though it seems you are speaking right to the reader. You have such a beautiful way of writing. I wish I could have such a talent. Keep up the great work!

19 July 2004 - 7:04pm — bluestar
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maybe you need to recite this to pa. my friend loved this one.

30 June 2004 - 1:27am — Megan Sassenrath (not verified)
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this is so hopeful, i love it! gosh i love the way you write

22 June 2004 - 11:22pm — Jillian Camtasia Carver (not verified)
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This may sound stupid.. but when I we reading this it felt like you were saying it to me...