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New Chains
I need new chains
To be bound with.
Not the old ones that
Chafe and squeak with
Rust.
But new ones
That jingle pleasantly
And are shiny and new
And less confining.
Author's Notes/Comments:
Update-I didn't realize I had a typo! :P
excellent
Very creative way of juxtaposing confinement, chains, and bindngs with freedom, definately makes this a thought provoking one on a few different levels.
Unchain My Heart
Full of certitude and wit, the tongue in cheek variety of humor. Layered nicely to make the mind go "vrrrrrriiiinnnnng!" - Just Bein' Stella.
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