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Little trickles of light

Prevent me from sleeping.

The alarm clock jams a crowbar

Under my eyelids.

Light from the moon sneaks through the blinds

Slicing my eyeballs.

A green light from the smoke detector

Is prickling my pupils.

Worst of all, worries burst from my heart

And play solos on my ribcage.

I need the blanket of darkness.

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©15 June 2015 - 6:59am — AngryLaughter
26 July 2015 - 2:38pm — bishu
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Really a GOOD one from all angles :)

Beautifully written

©bishu 

 

23 June 2015 - 9:44pm — tallsquirrelgirl
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I really like this one! cool

I really like this one! cool and descriptive

*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

23 June 2015 - 9:46pm — AngryLaughter
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Thanks.

Thanks. :)

15 June 2015 - 2:45pm — Carcass
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One way to battle insomnia is

One way to battle insomnia is to work out really hard before bed so your body is so exhausted that it just shuts down on its own without your mind causing you to stay awake.  At least that's what I ended up doing while I had insomnia.  Regardless, insomnia sucks but nice imagery in this poem.

15 June 2015 - 6:14pm — AngryLaughter
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Thanks

I like my room really dark.

15 June 2015 - 9:01am — allets
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It's 459 am here

It's not insomnia, I took anapanddrankcoffeelate. I love a good insomnia poem and this is a perfectly descriptive one. Bravo!

 

 

15 June 2015 - 7:14am — deepinyourdreams
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..

when i get tired enough, i throw  on some head phones and let the stereo rock me to sleep

"Deepinyourdreams"