Kisses

"Don't you wonder?" he said.

I looked up and tilt my head.

My eyes looked at him with confusion.



"No... not really." I said.

He looked down and smiled.

His eyes looked at me with sparks.



"Yes you do!" He said.

I looked up and glared.

My eyes looked at him with fire.



"NO I..." I didn't finish.

His face came close.

I couldn't focus...

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gemboy's picture

not just clever, but clever capturing the moment, as the moment should be

Marianne Chrisos's picture

I like this quite a bit, very unique

Lauren Callon's picture

this poem was so clever, I loved how the whole poem, kinda led up to the last little stanza. I read your bio and I hoep your Mom is doing better. I enjoyed reading all your poems. We are about the same age, so I can really relate to your work.