"Don't you wonder?" he said.
I looked up and tilt my head.
My eyes looked at him with confusion.
"No... not really." I said.
He looked down and smiled.
His eyes looked at me with sparks.
"Yes you do!" He said.
I looked up and glared.
My eyes looked at him with fire.
"NO I..." I didn't finish.
His face came close.
I couldn't focus...
not just clever, but clever capturing the moment, as the moment should be
I like this quite a bit, very unique
this poem was so clever, I loved how the whole poem, kinda led up to the last little stanza. I read your bio and I hoep your Mom is doing better. I enjoyed reading all your poems. We are about the same age, so I can really relate to your work.