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Restrained
Free from these chains
these chains that restrained
my thirst for adventure
pulling the reins
pulling closer tugging tighter
twisting turning tossing anger
fighting harder
breaking the steel
freeing my soul from a lifeless shell
free from the hell
that held me back
that held me forever
and holding me closer
wrapped with the chains
those god damned chains
the ones that protected me
and kept me from pains
from the pains that were felt
held back by the belt
the help of the belt
and the restrain of the chain
it was the help of my enemies
that kept me sane
You know sometimes it is good to be restrained...
honestly josh,i must say, im pleasently surprised, in a good way. XD
i think this is your best poem. the idea of the protection of imprisonement is good, you should try and rewrite, be more selective and the develop the ideas- never be happy with what you've already got
i really like this poem... and your name sounds REALLY familiar... i don't know why, i live on grosse ile, like an hour or two from grand rapids i think. you ever been there? cause i'd swear i've heard your name before...