Promise#1

Cell, oh wait I'm sorry, Smart

Phones have made me write poems

Less and Less over time

Today's a day I've logged in on desktop silicon

In so long

Thoughts I used to write out over tens of minutes, of hours

Are now spat on tweet walls with a character limit

Are we getting used to the limit?

Are we being trained to be limited?

So much has changed since I wrote my first

On post poems dot com.

It seems harder to think a whole thought these days

Something coherent takes me too long to think to speak

I'm not the only one

 

So I'll start again, I've got to. I've got to.

To get back to myself.

 

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lyrycsyntyme's picture

Here's to you getting back to yourself

If I may offer an answer to your two questions posed in this poem: Yes, and Yes.

 

I see it in my students all the time. They cannot muster together well strung out thoughts, constantly trained in their life outside of school by "tweets" and "memes" and so on. I also see it in some of my family/friends, when ever they tell that a two paragraph email is a "bible" they "can't read". 

 

This is a good poem, but most importantly, it's what it means to you and your days ahead that can make it a cherishable one when you look back at your life story. How did expressing yourself, being you, turn out? What was the moment it changed? Good luck, and hope to see you writing more here : )

anexod's picture

fascinating about your

fascinating about your students. thank you for your kind words.