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Hmm..I wonder...? A mystery,
An enigma,
My weakness.
Tell me you love me,
And I will die
die
die.
Tell me you need me,
And I am yours forever.
Give me those promises,
The ones that are empty
And lies.
Just lead me on,
Say you're mine
mine
mine.
Give me forever,
Even just for a while.
Say that you'll kiss me,
Even if you pretend.
Tell me I'm beautiful,
And I'll sigh
sigh
sigh.
Just give me that look,
That you want me,
want me,
want me.
And you'll have me
Forever,
Even if only in my head.
I would say that men ARE like this too.
At least the ones that aren't buttheads.
And No, all men aren't buttheads.
Sweet and bitter
Ach ja, horrid creatures. I am scared of becoming a feminist soon, running around town with signs saying "ALLY MEN ARE PIGS INDEED!" Are they, who knows. Love the poem. Scares me that I have become like that. I never thought I would...
this is a great poem !!!! I'thinking about an offspring " women" ...women are just a gift from Him ,God !! apart: I really enjoyed this poem
You are a wise woman in your few years on earth...Having the insite to men...HAHAHA!!!...but it all does come down to paying attention...to you...to him...to each other...good poem
I am not asking for understanding, I am not asking for depth, I am not asking for love. I am stating, that in all my 19 years of life, the only thing that kills me, my only weakness, is men. Look at me, kiss me, say hello to me, and these men, all men, any man, is in my head swimming around. Causing confusion, depression, heartache, happiness, lust and love. Give me attention, and my imagination soars...
I could say the same about women. but as jeff foxworthy said. Men are easy to understand. All we want is a beer and we wanna see something naked. I'm sorry if its nothing more deep. but It is a really good poem
I like this poem! Love your "forever" lines! Good posting!
I hear ya sista. Curse the oily hydes of men. Except me of course. I liked your poem, it made sense. Sounds like you are pretty jaded. I think this can be applied to women as well though, they can be just as confusing if not more so. I really like the lines "give me forever, if only for a little while" Really nice work. Oh and thanks for the comment at my page. Okay bye bye now. <(((______CRAYOLA AND YOU ROCK_______((()