If tomorrow I was to sail
For the passages of the sea,
I'd deck the sails with maps,
The hull with images of thee.
My brow tender, never tiring,
Always searching the far off line.
For the distance keeps a promise
Where blue ocean meets bluer sky.
The planks would bear Brazilian gold,
The hull a reverent sheen.
Day and night my crew chanting
Where your vestige had last been seen.
The gods looking on in wonder,
We'd sail on and on, unmarred.
How far will this man sail for love?
How far? they'd ask, How far?
And coming upon a beach,
And collapsing upon a shore,
We'd find an isle of sweet delight
And you and nothing more!
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If tomorrow I was to sail
This is beautiful, remanicant, alluring and so lovely. I could even get jealous. What a lovely style of writing you have in this poem. Hope you and your lover much happiness. Tear, sob your poem is so appealing.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Cute. (Hope you don't mind
Cute. (Hope you don't mind that word, and maybe I felt something else at first but by the end, that's what came)
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A cross between
Poe and Melville - I love sea tales. This one is haunting. - alllets.