You struck me like lightning.
You rend my life in two
Into before and after
I met you.
You warm me by candle light.
You fill me with the slow
radiating glow
of embers.
As if I stumbled in the night
Into a large orange grove
Full of blooms
My favorite scent.
And here I am
At night
Deep in a forest of orange blossoms
Lit by flickering light
In the perfect place and time
Caressed by Fate and the luck
Of your lightning strike.
Hazzah! Boom! Great write
Hazzah! Boom! Great write
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
ThankSSS
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kit - keep in touch, htsys hope to see you soon ect. u r missed, - be well - slc
Sorry Stella!
I was stuck reading the Dune saga, a scifi series that I hadn’t read before. That was about 6 months of my spare time!!!
Embets
Evocative, sensual. Love the use of scent via orange blossoms, I like it too.
My Secret River
Thank you
I try to incorporate other senses, but it’s a struggle because I’moverwhelmingly visual.