Bitchslap

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Poetry

Fuck you. I don't want you. I hate you.

You're dragging, dragging me down.

I'm hiding, hiding from you.

I'm running, running away.

Pull, you hate me.

Kill you, want to watch you bleed.

Die motherfucker.

Don't want you because you don't want me.

I hate you.

Take this bitchslap straight to your fucking face.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Another one of my moments of being pissed off.

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Tim Derr's picture

Interesting burst of serious anger.

This poem displays some real power. I found the idea of the bitchslap to be intriguing when juxtaposed in connotation like that.

Well done as a presentation. Hope the bitter emotions and the underlying truth to this, have ceased to cause you pain. ~Tim