Dawns Arrival

Two lovers,

perched together in a warm embrace atop a grassy knoll;

the stereotypical American love scene.

A blanket to cover them both,

perhaps a drink or two for sharing as well,

add the romanticism and passion of the kiss

and the formula is complete.



They lie back,

twin sets of eyes focused on a beaming sky.

Stars fading from sight,

giving in to the beckoning of a sunrise.

Golden rays of fire crest the horizon,

a Phoenix to drag the world into a new day;

such would be the olden mythology.

Another star fades and the gaze of a young love is shifted.

No longer does the disappearing black sky hold interest,

rather, the invading auras of yellow, orange and gold capture the eye.

A gaze to the east quickly turns into something new

as the two face each other once more.

Heads meet shoulders and the cycle begins:

a whisper of hope, mere dreams put into words.

Remaining fears are erased with the Dawn

and a new life is begun.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Think about this one; there's more to it than there might seem.

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beckyyyyyyyy, smelly.'s picture

Wow. Jacob. Wow. Just. ....Wow. *pees* I can't believe I didn't read this one 'til just now. That one's like. My favorite now. You have no idea.

The imagery is just beautiful.

I'm gonna. Write that in my notebook. So when I feel like butt. I can just read it and be like *..awwwee* And I'll feel not like butt. (: It made sense in my head STFU!