Arising Realm

Choose the sign by which to follow,

to give your every last bit

of freewill and spirit to wholly.

Live by the sign;

devote your entire being unto it;

refuse to abide by another.

Within the land, the earth,

there lies the source for power beyond imagination.

It is here where we shall make our living;

this is the land where the Ancient Kings made their homes,

their riches,

and ultimately their demises.

Follow the path, oh young child of the night;

make your existence known to all,

by means of fire

and divine intent.

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J-C4113d's picture

You have a really refined power of implied evocation---that is, your poem in the foreground evokes an implied background of enormous consequence, which the poem merely alludes to---giving it a factual-seeming existence. Most poets cannot do this; because they become to preoccupied with the background and not the foreground. You have overcome this obstacle and proceeded to do the evocation exactly right! I applaud you!


J-Called