Feeling all alone, in a crowd of friends.
Wondering if you will ever find
The strength to move on.
Drowning into the emptiness of your soul,
Your emotions crowd your heart and mind,
You wait for an explosion to set them free.
Your loneliness consumes your soul.
You gasp for a breath of life,
But your heart remains dead.
You move on through life as a shadow,
Waiting to be noticed, loved, and held.
Waiting for life to re-enter your soul,
And make you happy once again.
Instead you drown into your sea of emotions,
You search frantically for resolution,
But you know you can't feel that rush alone.
You look onto life around you in a daze,
Wishing you wouldn't go unnoticed,
Hoping to find the comfort and happiness
You can feel only when you are loved.
OMG!, I can't believe how much I can really, truly relate to this poem. Mostly everything that you have describe in this poem, I have felt so much throughout my short 21 years of life.
This is really a great poem and I can really, really relate to this.
Keep up the great work and hope to read more from you really, really soon.